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文本的叙述速度有些快,会让人觉得有些吃快餐的感觉,如果加入一些慢动作的抒情,这样叙述的节奏就会低于现实时间,给人一种如小溪缓缓流淌的感觉,这样读者的情感更容易被调动起来。该用户表示中立"); document.write("
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随笔的感觉更重一些。该用户表示中立"); document.write("
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